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My name is XXX, are administered by one from the Department of XXXX graduates. I majored in International Economics and Trade.
I chose the profession entirely because their financial and economic love me in the learning process fun and have a strong interest in a deeper study. When I was a child, I felt to be a banker and financier. Because I feel that in a complex figure in the law of search, seize the opportunity and use their own intelligence to turn them into benefits is a very interesting and has a sense of achievement thing. Everyone's life boils down to money, so everyone can not be separated from management. This is a profound and interesting subjects, how to make money more valuable, I think from the financial and economic study, I can find the answer. We have to let the money work for us instead of us work for money.
At the same time, it is undeniable that China is now the financial sector in Europe and America and Japan have developed a considerable gap. We started late, less universal, small-scale, especially in derivative products. Then decided we would like to participate in international financial competition, to study the experience of developed countries. This is also my choice of International Economics and Trade of the profession and eager to go for further studies of the reasons for the United Kingdom.
Studying at the university during my very favorite concerned with international economic changes, and my mentor and classmates to discuss related issues. In particular, the United States are sub-loan crisis and the serious impact on the world economy, this topic of urgent and important it becomes all the more. In addition, I also stocks spare time, this experience very special, let me also benefited. I am still in summer vacation last year, Huaxia bank internships, more direct contact with a deeper understanding of the operation of the principle of bank funds and means.

My name is XXX, are administered by one from the Department of XXXX graduates. I majored in International Economics and Trade.
I chose the profession entirely because their financial and economic love me in the learning process fun and have a strong interest in a deeper study. When I was a child, I felt to be a banker and financier. Because I feel that in a complex figure in the law of search, seize the opportunity and use their own intelligence to turn them into benefits is a very interesting and has a sense of achievement thing. Everyone's life boils down to money, so everyone can not be separated from management. This is a profound and interesting subjects, how to make money more valuable, I think from the financial and economic study, I can find the answer. We have to let the money work for us instead of us work for money.
At the same time, it is undeniable that China is now the financial sector in Europe and America and Japan have developed a considerable gap. We started late, less universal, small-scale, especially in derivative products. Then decided we would like to participate in international financial competition, to study the experience of developed countries. This is also my choice of International Economics and Trade of the profession and eager to go for further studies of the reasons for the United Kingdom.
Studying at the university during my very favorite concerned with international economic changes, and my mentor and classmates to discuss related issues. In particular, the United States are sub-loan crisis and the serious impact on the world economy, this topic of urgent and important it becomes all the more. In addition, I also stocks spare time, this experience very special, let me also benefited. I am still in summer vacation last year, Huaxia bank internships, more direct contact with a deeper understanding of the operation of the principle of bank funds and means.
Financial and economic are all things can not be avoided, I believe that only through more study and participation in order to better grasp its laws, correctly handle together to resist the global financial crisis.

to be honest, your chinese article limits my creation to improve the readability of such a reference letter in english...