英语短文改错

If someone asks you how you can make you always
<第二个you改成yourself>
happy,you will perhaps find rather difficult to give him

a proper answer.Did you remember the old saying“No

human being can really be happy who is not giving or trying,

to give happiness to others”？if you will always think of
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taking more from other and give them less,you won't be

able to have happiness in your life even you are very rich.

Here is an article for you.If each of you follow it,

your unhappy day will come to an end.SO you should

learnt to give up your own interests when necessarily
to do so.


以上答案仅供参考。。我不确定

Dear John,
I'm writing to tell you about my English. Over these years I have learned approximate 3500 English words. I can read some English books and write short essays in simple English, but I have difficulty to communicate with others .I can't catch the teacher when he speaks fast, therefore, I cannot get myself over when I speak to others. I know it is important for us to learn a foreign language well, so I determined to work harder at English and do more practices. Now I hope you can offer me some advices on how to improve my English. I would like to know your opinions.
楼主的这篇看上去像自己写的，那么我的意见是学好英语，首先是单词要掌握，然后是语法。加上不懈的锻炼 （读 说 写）就能很快提高英语水平。通过大量阅读，掌握语感和词汇，然后自己写，写完检查，修改来提高语法水平。逐渐的，开口说也就不是难事了。

Dear John
I am writing regarding my English learning. In past years I have learned approximate 3500 words and so so far I can read some propaedeutic English articals and write some short essays. But communicating with others face to face is still a problem for me. I found difficulties to catch teachers whom speak fast and when I spoke to others, I felt not easy. I know it is important for our generation to learn a foreign language, therefore, I will work hard on English learnin and to do more practices. Would you please offer me some suggestions on how to improve oral English.
Looking forward to hear from you.

All the best!

you->yourself
find后面加上it
Did->Do
who前面加if
去掉will
give->giving
even后面加上if
follow->follows
day->days
learnt->learn
necessarily->necessary