Today I've got (a去掉) wonderful news to tell you. I have (加上been) offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. One hundred and twenty students took exams for it, (so改成but) only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, my parent are not happy (about改成with) it。
They are (strong改成strongly) against my going there. They say it is so far away that they will not see me for a whole year and are afraid (of改成that) I will feel lonely. They can't imagine (a girl放到so young后面) so young (live改成living) alone. They advise (I改成me) to study in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with them. What(改成How) can I persuade them to accept the fact that I have grown up?