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My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn

Festival. It's a traditional Chinese

festival. It usually falls in September

or October. 如果你们学了从句, 可以用更高级的表达 It's a traditional

Chinese festival which falls in

September or October. I often eat

mooncakes and watch the bright full

moon on Mid-Autumn Day. I like

this festival because I can eat

mooncakes and spend some quality

time with my families. Mooncakes

are sweet and they come in

different flavors. They taste

great ! My favorite kind is the one

with yolk fillings. I really love

Mid-Autumn Festival .

我用了些更生动, 详细的描述, 使整个表达更流畅, 丰富。 望采纳！