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正文内容:
It is fast comfortable and convinient to travel by plane. It is also timesaving. Eg, if you want to go to Yuannan, it only take you over three hours by plane but you should spend more than thirty hours to go there by train.
The beautiful hostess will take care of you on the plane so you don't need to worry anything. But of course every coin has two sides, traveling by plane sometimes delay by bad weather so you have to wait for a long time in the waiting hall.
And you have to shut off your cell phone on the plane. Sometimes you can't enjoy the beautiful scenery.
译文:
乘飞机旅行既快又舒适。这也节省了时间。如果你想去云南,坐飞机只需要三个多小时,但坐火车要花三十个多小时。美丽的女主人会在飞机上照顾你,所以你不必担心任何事情。
当然,每个硬币都有两面性,乘飞机旅行有时会因天气不好而延误,所以你必须在候机大厅里等很长时间。在飞机上你必须关掉手机。有时你不能欣赏美丽的风景。
It is fast comfortable and convinient to travel by plane. It is also timesaving. Eg, if you want to go to Yuannan, it only take you over three hours by plane but you should spend more than thirty hours to go there by train. The beautiful hostess will take care of you on the plane so you don't need to worry anything. But of course every coin has two sides, traveling by plane sometimes delay by bad weather so you have to wait for a long time in the waiting hall. And you have to shut off your cell phone on the plane. Sometimes you can't enjoy the beautiful scenery.
For my own perspective, taking areoplanes has its proside and also drawbacks.
Aeroplanes are convinient for its speed, and air services are good. Many people would like to try this kind of transportation. But Aeroplane industries are not well developed nowadays in China. Tickets are money-consuming, airspace is congested and a little bit dangerous for some reasons. The expandation of the Industry was limited by Chinese Airforce- there're simply few airports for General Aviation!
The best mean of transportation in China is railway service. Railways means less pollution, comfortable beds and seats. The railway department is trying to create quick railways, which was called 'CRH'- the Chinese Railway Highspeed. I think this kind of techonology will bring us greater enjoyment ,more exitement and more anticipation to the journey.